I understand what you're saying about your own writing. Until recently, I've been paralyzed by the thought of anyone criticizing what I've written. However, I've come to realize that if I want a serious career in writing I have to toughen up and suck it up and put it out there. And it's not easy. Not at all. But I'm working through it and asking for feedback from people I trust and hopefully it will lead to something more than what it currently is.

I'm going to read the second VD book since I bought it and I'll let you know from there.